Sound on Pain
The sweetest sound strums,
The ghost echoes its voice,
The loneliest man waits.
Life
The body lay still, limp,
Cold air rushes throughout,
The most life he ever felt.
Death
Raven nested in sight,
Red and blue lights flash,
The girl stained with blood.
These are really well written haikus! They come together in their last lines. I really like the second one because of the meaning that's given to it right at the end. The one titled death is also great, I like how the first line foreshadows the last.
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